Searching for answers in my teacup,
looking deep into the tarot dealers lines,
searching stars, numbers and magical runes,
maybe... I should just search your eyes.
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I love it Viola... this is very good. i am going to put it in my favs. good job. Becca
I like this very simple verse with a deepness 'searching stars' and eyes are such mystical symbols of themselves. Very intense and yet restrained with its forthcoming revelation.
Firstly, thanks for your comments. I'm fairly new to poetry and I'm keen to improve. I read some of your writing and especially liked 'Answers'. I've read it a few times and I think everyone can relate to it in some way.
I agree with Sathya... Small is beautiful - but a guy would, wouldn't he!
Small is beautiful. So expressive in few words...it is a lesson to budding poets. sathya narayana
Ah! how do I describe it? Your simplicity mystifies me... It is truth you put forth.
Within the eyes lay the answer......always! Please read 'Ecstasy.' Excellent composition.
Search the eyes, It never fails, you'll get the answers Viola! *10*! ! Great read, Friend Thad
most of the answers we are looking for are right in front of our eyes...lovley poem
Tis easier to just change the questions me thinkest... aroha
I love the depth of meaning and the pure simplicity of the poem.