Saturday, June 21, 2008

Answers Comments

Rating: 4.3

Searching for answers in my teacup,
looking deep into the tarot dealers lines,
searching stars, numbers and magical runes,
maybe... I should just search your eyes.
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Viola Grey
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Jann Rau 14 May 2012

I love the depth of meaning and the pure simplicity of the poem.

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Christopher Gozdava 13 May 2012

Very good short poem. I like it a lot. Christopher Heart

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Mark R Slaughter 14 April 2009

Very succinctly put Viola! Great piece. Regards Mark

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*Trusting You* 29 November 2008

I love it Viola... this is very good. i am going to put it in my favs. good job. Becca

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Patti Masterman 10 November 2008

I like this very simple verse with a deepness 'searching stars' and eyes are such mystical symbols of themselves. Very intense and yet restrained with its forthcoming revelation.

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Tom Balch 01 October 2008

The answer, is always to be found in the eyes 10+ Tom

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Matthew Coombe 21 July 2008

Firstly, thanks for your comments. I'm fairly new to poetry and I'm keen to improve. I read some of your writing and especially liked 'Answers'. I've read it a few times and I think everyone can relate to it in some way.

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Fred Babbin 11 July 2008

This one sort of hits where I itch.

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Assorted Thoughts 04 July 2008

Wow! I think this one speaks to everybody.10+

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Kevin Wells 03 July 2008

I agree with Sathya... Small is beautiful - but a guy would, wouldn't he!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 July 2008

Small is beautiful. So expressive in few words...it is a lesson to budding poets. sathya narayana

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Bandit Madison 30 June 2008

Ah! how do I describe it? Your simplicity mystifies me... It is truth you put forth.

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James B. Earley 23 June 2008

Within the eyes lay the answer......always! Please read 'Ecstasy.' Excellent composition.

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Thad Wilk 22 June 2008

Search the eyes, It never fails, you'll get the answers Viola! *10*! ! Great read, Friend Thad

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Hela Jug 22 June 2008

most of the answers we are looking for are right in front of our eyes...lovley poem

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Emancipation Planz 21 June 2008

Tis easier to just change the questions me thinkest... aroha

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