Friday, November 6, 2009

Answered Prayer Comments

Rating: 4.7

i said a love prayer, but no one was there to hear
so i climbed into my bed
just so that i could rest my aching head.
i fell asleep right away
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louis rams
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Christine Kerr 14 November 2009

This one made me smile, Always love those surprise endings.

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Matt Mooney 13 November 2009

Memorable mention of of how you met your future loved one at mass. Life is like that anyway- full of lovely surprises! From the dream to reality it is an enjoyable read. Read my 'Exit 9'.

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Deborah Cromer 07 November 2009

Good foundation and positive story built. Imagination and miracles combined to create magic and mystery. Love the way it turns out! This has alot of good energy towards the power of prayer. Nice work. Debbie

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Kranthi Pothineni 06 November 2009

Very beautiful tale my friend. It had a pleasant feel and lovely flow. Nice write.

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