Wednesday, June 15, 2022

Answer Your Inner Self Comments

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‘I don't want to
Be a mother now'
You said.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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The U.S. Supreme Court has overturned the "Abortion Rights", rescinding on the landmark decision of 1973, in the case of Roe v. Wade.

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Thank You Richard and Bri for your remarkable feedback. Much obliged

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Richard Wlodarski 17 June 2022

Poet Menon, you've done an absolutely brilliant job with this poem. The subject matter is so sensitive and so timely. And so very personal. A very well thought out poem. Brilliantly presented.

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Thank you Richard. I do believe seriously that 'planned parenthood' is the solution, now that we have any number birth control devises & medicines to choose from.

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Starking 17 June 2022

Well penned down, i like this

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But, Gods, and of course Nature, are discriminating. The burden of pregnancy and motherhood lies solely with the female. Other animals do not complain, so we think. But humans?

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

I urge either 'parent' to seek counseling regarding topics such as abortion and suicide. Planned Parenthood may help some people decide the 'right course' for them.

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True Bri, But people object that "the right course" suggested by you should not impede their "right to intercourse". Hope you understand,

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

Should a 'father' be able to stop a 'mother' 's choice for abortion? These and others are unfortunate questions posed by conceptions.

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

boon or burden? ? sometimes a situation is some of each. nicely done. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

Well written, but who is 'I' in last line?

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The hapless poet, Dear Sir. If there is a "YOUl, there needs to be an " I " too, isn't it? So he is there, Sir.

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

In general I approve of abortion (not forced) and equal responsibility for conceptions due to concensual intercourse.

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But, in the case of intercourse outside marriage, man can just walk out. Even in the case of in-marriage.. But, the decision is of Nature or gods who cursed Eve, that she would endure labour pain, as the price for ‘eleven-minutes-long pleasure' (If I borrow the concept from Paulo Coelho.)

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

discrimination: treating a class of people differently (presumably poorly) e.g. based on race, color, national origin, gender, sexual preference.

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2022

I see (in my search) that 'boon' may be an adjective. As a noun it means: 'The meaning of BOON is a timely benefit: blessing.'...and it MAY have a 'price-tag' for sure. I say not always.

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Wow! That is wonderful, Bri. "Boon" is a word I had studied (because English is not my mother tongue) while at school. I didn't consult a dictionary while using the word in the poem. My fault. (Smiles) …

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Part 2. About ‘price tag". Liberty of the poet, Sir. The poet writes ‘always'. Bri MAY read ‘sometimes'. Smiles, Sir.

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What abortion laws have to do with personal liberty? Is there a conflict?

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Debate on Abortion Laws

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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