Answer To Valsa George's Quest For An Anonymous Lover Comments

i still like it; it still has one or two typos. bri :)

three years after my first comment here: i did not notice (or at least mention) the typo here: A swarml of bees settled on my neck; but i still 'love' the poem. bri :) so, did you get invited for 'tea and scones' [i've never heard it called that! ! ! ]? ?

David, I'm just getting introduced to Valsa's poetry and really love it. The title of your poem intrigued me and diverted me from a communication to her. I'm glad. The poem is a riot! I couldn't stop laughing. This was my first read of your poetry. Looking forward to more. You might like my Legendary Performance. But please do not read the last line first. Please comment and/or rate it. Thanks.

So so so fun and funny! You are clever my friend! xo

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Did I make my point? This is such a great poem! Loaded with tasteful humor! I certainly needed a good chuckle today and your poem gave me full out belly laughs! You did an amazing job with this piece David! Kudos to you! ! ! !

..............truly enjoyed this creative write....you gave me a laugh, too