Answer Me (C) 12-19-09 Comments

Very clear expression of your tender sentiments, and boldly so, beautifully portrayed! I loved your poem, you have a great potential! And let me tell you Love is not dependence as often lover say, ' I can't love without him/her'. This is incorrect. Love is a conscious choice of independent(and not dependent- slaves) two individual to live together and enjoy the independence.Thanks.

Beautiful babe! : ~) almost had mii cryin! x

Your analogies are great! And the emotion of dying love is really captured here

Wow! This really evokes feelings of a love slipping a way while all one can do is helplessly watch.

wow great poem, i can see the emotion. well done

You are developing you own style. This one reads smoothly and presents your case in a noteworthy way. You are good at rhyming and coming up with something worthwhile to say.

This poem is beautiful i can feel the emotion in it. your a really good writer i love how you show emotions so easily with your writing its effortless it seems. :)

my favorite lines....'I know there's some steps necessary before we can express affection Because my thinking of our possible future seems to be my only protection I don’t know the reasons oral words just doesn’t seem to read right I guess the only way to let you hear how I feel is ironically to write I wanna kiss you and I miss you but maybe us can never be' i dont want to be like everyone and just say these are my favorite lines but....this truly is a loving poem. I really feel the emotions of love and pain and so much more personally you displayed love and pursuing a love one and not lettling go in a good way putting yourself out there....truly i respect this

Maybe I’m just tripping or constantly movin like a dancer I really hope we can be together so now I really need an answer. Really beautiful expression. Nicely penned. Deserves 10+++++

I know there's some steps necessary before we can express affection Because my thinking of our possible future seems to be my only protection I don’t know the reasons oral words just doesn’t seem to read right I guess the only way to let you hear how I feel is ironically to write These lines are... amazing. I love them so much. Plus beautiful poem.

Even though I love you there’s something I can’t contain This feeling of utter disappointment and of some undying pain These lines really spoke your pain and 'utter disappointment' Very well crafted, I Loved it.

Sorry for not responding sooner. I liked the simile of the dying spark and the eye of the storm. An eternal question which every generation must find its own way to ask and answer.

Well. You are asking a question through this poem. Will the answer be another poem?

I think that's really sweet.

AWWWW that's so adorable... i know exactly how you feel, so i really love this poem. don't worry, a guy like you shouldn't have a problem getting a girl... maybe you should show her the poem. girls are a sucker for sweet poems...

I like this poem.. It is so sweeat.

This is like sooo SWEET` however ur writing bout is obvioulsy missing out on sum1 great!

This is amazingly sweet! :) She is missing out on a grat guy.

This is a wonderful 'from-the-heart' poem. Keep up the good work!

Dude i know this kinda feeling all too well: (...