Thursday, August 7, 2008

Another You Comments

Rating: 5.0

here lies my soul, burning endlesness
and so i cried, pouring out forgiveness
i'll give up the fight, i'll leave you behind
i'll lost a treasure that is so hard to find
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ahmad tarmizi
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Sharon Page 13 August 2008

Ahmad, Very touching, very nice I like it. Sharon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 August 2008

could we withstand the agony.....losing a loveress.as a matter of fact it's the most devastating sorrow you could ever imagined

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Ahmad Tarmizi 13 August 2008

*...~IN LOVING MEMORY OF MY BELOVED FARRAH FAEZA...DEC 2003~DEC 2006, KUALALUMPUR, MALAYSIA...OUR LAST N FINAL MET IN DEC 2006 AT UITM SHAH ALAM SELANGOR...WE STARTED ANEW LIFE...WALKING THROUGH A DIFFERENT PASSAGE...IT'S JUST ANOTHER WALK OF LIFE~ (DIRE STRAITS) ...///...SHE INSPIRED ME A LOT WITH MY POEM..(A DEAD POEM ACTUALLY) ...MAYBE THIS IS MY LAST POEM FOR HER I WROTE..IT'S MORE LIKE A TO MYSELF I SUPPOSED N SHE ARE PART OF IT, THE REASON! ! ! .., (MORE ACCURATE) ..! ! ! MUST THANX HER ANYWAY FOR INSPIRING ME WITH MY POEM WHICH IS A HUGE 'GIFT'...& FOR ME TO U/STAND D MEANING FOR BEING LIKE THIS HAS IT'S OWN BEAUTY...I KNOW FARRAH U'LL NEVER U/STAND.....~NYMPHETAMINE~

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Alice Wedderburn 07 August 2008

This brought tears to my eyes. Deep and well written to bring out such emotions.. it moved me.

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ahmad tarmizi

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