Sunday, December 30, 2012

Another Year Comments

Rating: 4.9

Another year has set its course
Within the wheels of time
With many pathways to traverse
And mountains yet to climb
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Valerie Dohren
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Joe Hughes 30 December 2015

So to Valerie I say Have a fruitful, poetic year. No cliche, trite nor hackneyed phrase Will find a shelter here!

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Simply beautiful! ! ! ...........................

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

Good piece. Compelling and flowing images that create a very nice read indeed. Excellent write.

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G.R. Gaus 16 April 2013

So be it as you say these rhymes, in perfection once again, descriptions of this year to come, your message meant to send.....

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Patricia Grantham 29 January 2013

Dear Val, I am most impressed and very humbled by this poem. I invite you to read no room to hate Love Patricia

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Mary Forrester 11 January 2013

Such a beautiful poem Valerie.

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Owain Glyn 10 January 2013

As you quite rightly say, round we go again!

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Godfrey Morris 06 January 2013

lovely; a very happy new year

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Meena Mustafa 04 January 2013

A wonderful poem :) wishing you a very happy newyear.

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Lyn Paul 02 January 2013

Very Beautiful, who knows what tomorrow will bring. Thank You

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Dave Walker 01 January 2013

Like it. We will have to make do with what comes to us. But there is nothing to say we can't help things good come to us. We can make our own luck in this world. A great poem and a happy new year.

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Kelvin Owusu 01 January 2013

you always have great poem, lovely read Happy New Year

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Stevie Taite 31 December 2012

I always take a deep breath after each poem as I let the lovely read was over me! Thank you and I just love your poems! X x x Happy New Year Valerie! X x

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Sallam Yassin 31 December 2012

you write as soul of Rose with bearthe of mount so pure Let the year 2013 be yours

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Unwritten Soul 31 December 2012

Oh Val, Happy greatest new year for you..a step to continue smile in each ticking clock time_Soul

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Sandra Feldman 31 December 2012

Most beautiful New Year's Message I have ever read. I loved the rhythm of your verse, it's musicality. Also, how beautifully you summarize all that takes place during the year, with such eloquent verses. A most happy and healthy New Year for you, your family and for all those that can still create and dream

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Valsa George 30 December 2012

A beautiful write at the close of the passing year and the dawn of yet another New Year! Whether it is joy for some and sorrow for many, the Earth, as you say will turn relentlessly! ! Happy New Year, Valerie! !

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Heather Wilson 30 December 2012

A delightful poem Val, I do hope you have no mountains to climb in 2013, A very happy New Year to you.

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Hazel Durham 30 December 2012

So beautiful with the great wonders of nature, life and death woven into a great poem! Happy New Year Val!

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