Another year has set its course
Within the wheels of time
With many pathways to traverse
And mountains yet to climb
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Simply beautiful! ! ! ...........................
Good piece. Compelling and flowing images that create a very nice read indeed. Excellent write.
So be it as you say these rhymes, in perfection once again, descriptions of this year to come, your message meant to send.....
Dear Val, I am most impressed and very humbled by this poem. I invite you to read no room to hate Love Patricia
Like it. We will have to make do with what comes to us. But there is nothing to say we can't help things good come to us. We can make our own luck in this world. A great poem and a happy new year.
I always take a deep breath after each poem as I let the lovely read was over me! Thank you and I just love your poems! X x x Happy New Year Valerie! X x
you write as soul of Rose with bearthe of mount so pure Let the year 2013 be yours
Oh Val, Happy greatest new year for you..a step to continue smile in each ticking clock time_Soul
Most beautiful New Year's Message I have ever read. I loved the rhythm of your verse, it's musicality. Also, how beautifully you summarize all that takes place during the year, with such eloquent verses. A most happy and healthy New Year for you, your family and for all those that can still create and dream
A beautiful write at the close of the passing year and the dawn of yet another New Year! Whether it is joy for some and sorrow for many, the Earth, as you say will turn relentlessly! ! Happy New Year, Valerie! !
A delightful poem Val, I do hope you have no mountains to climb in 2013, A very happy New Year to you.
So beautiful with the great wonders of nature, life and death woven into a great poem! Happy New Year Val!
So to Valerie I say Have a fruitful, poetic year. No cliche, trite nor hackneyed phrase Will find a shelter here!