Sunday, April 25, 2010

Another Year Comments

Rating: 5.0

log fueled fire blazes in a hearth, throwing out intermittent shadows embellishing a darkened room a flickering candle burns through yet another Christmas eve its light reaches out to highlight images of a family past
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kaya Brodio 02 March 2024

takes one on a season of the fall in a fantastic way. Wow!

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Kevi Keego 14 July 2019

I can visualize the light bouncing around the room highlighting family photos! Great poet

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Kevi Keego 14 July 2019

I can visualize the shawdows and the light from the fire highlighting his family pictures hung on the walls. A very gifted poet

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Margeret Downes-minger 05 July 2015

So melancholy. Alone at Christmas and it seems all year every year. Brilliant piece of work Mike.

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 13 May 2015

Another year, indeed! ! !

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Henry F James 27 February 2015

I agree with you Jack C Adams! ten from me!

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Henry F James 27 February 2015

This a beautiful poem and indeed depicts the height of lonliness not only at Christmas but every day! Another ten from me Mike.

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Jack Colbrook Addams 26 January 2015

Masterpiece! Keep them coming Mike! Loved it! depicts lonely people in a sad and tragic way.

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Hazel Durham 18 January 2015

Evocative, superb write with the stark facts of living alone without family, brought out with great depth of the coldness of living alone!

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Tanya De Burgh 30 December 2014

Heartfelt! ! I thought it was me sitting there! What a way with words Mike! !

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Phil Monger 08 February 2014

Wonderful! ! Wow! ! Another great poem Mike! !

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George C Collingwood 10 August 2012

I am a fan of yours Mike. You actually take the person and the subject into a lovely dream state. I can visualise the scenario you have described perfectly. Terrific poet.

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Pure and simply brilliant/ I was in the room with the person..

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Mary Donnelly 16 July 2012

I can feel the heat of the fire and hear the wind blowing outside. Your poet expresses what we would all like to state about being lonely. A truly gifted and great poet Mike

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Morgan Churchill 04 July 2012

I can feel the atmosphere as if I was sitting in the chair. Family memories, light bouncing off pictures on wall. Wow! Splendid poem and the same for the poet!

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Thomas Charles Harvey 28 October 2011

I noticed you have used a Scottish word 'outwith' meaning outside. Your sad poem brings home the message clearly that people do end up on their own and not just at Christmas time. Brought a tear to my eye! Superb poem!

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William Fc Smyth 19 April 2011

The more I read of Mikes poems the more I want to read! Please put more on this site Mike. Brilliant, is my best word for you.

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Fred Scott 12 February 2011

Very thought provoking! A poem about loneliness. I can feel the despair! Well done! !

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Rob Mckeown 05 September 2010

another wonderful poem. I can embrace the emotion! !

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Lynn Glover 06 May 2010

Mike: Once again I see a beautiful poem and can hear the creaking of the rocking chair as the wind roars and blows the snow outside. Very good. Your friend, Lynn

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