Friday, January 1, 2010

Another Year Comments

Rating: 3.0

As if we were planets
Waltzing into another universe
We sit down to dinner
There’s too much smoke between us
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Robert Leary
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 January 2010

Excellent imagery and intense emotionc conveyed. I like the last resolute lines, it completes the poem effectively. Great write!

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