Another Work In Progress Comments

I think I know what you did. ha ha. Loved this poem. Good one; D

Too much excitement through intoxication is not good for the body.Beautiful works Nav.

so nice and appriciated job there Luwi

good write well written

Extraordinary and beautiful.10.

interesting...concocotion, well done

Toothpaste and brandy, half nine in the morning, just another one of those nights, where nothing goes right. Now i feel as rough as a badgers', head throbin'; throught colgin', what did i do to diserve this? you seem perfect poet...thats why doing poems perfectly and professionally..really enjoy your work..good job... like the way you do in short form..and very much meaningful... liked it 10/10