Monday, March 11, 2013

Another Winter (Imagism) Comments

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Biting coldness grabs me with rain on this winter night -
where I walk along the promenade
and the wind is alive
and grabs on to me and grabs me again
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Daniel 16 January 2019

I like your poem but please pay attention to your grammar. Small mistakes like a impudent really ruin the entire poem.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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