Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, January 17, 2014

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It was becoming an inhuman act
He can not be called human in fact
Leaving behind son and good wife
In search of lovely and another life
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2014

Good TrueGift ButtsLess than a minute ago This poem speaks about thoughts of regret and learning from mistakes. I like the parts that rhyme.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2014

good morals Svetlana Igolkina4 minutes ago I like that, wishing people would follow more of the morals like in the poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2014

Love is the mystery of the heart. Tomas J GironLess than a minute ago The eyes of humans are blind you see, for in their dream they cannot see, the real beauty lies in the love you had when in the start... Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2014

nice Jawahar GuptaLess than a minute ago good composition

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2014

It was becoming an inhuman act He can not be called human in fact

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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