Another Version Of Me Comments

A well cafted piece with a touch of darkness. Thanks for sharing such vivid imagery. Great write

It's not in / my personality to have charisma, a / strong will and ambitions / I need something... romantic like sweet / kisses and delicate / caresses.... //.... It is not always possible to get what we want but be positive and make sincere effort to make your dreams come true. Thanks & Congrats.

A soliloquy of a common women narrating her strengths and weaknesses as also her demands from life. Congrats on poem of the day.

Honest feelings pouring out of this brilliant and intriguing.poem. " Sometimes I fear too much of the darkness and of my shadow." ...... The negative vibrations of this uncertain existence? Congrats for POD.

Very impressing BIO of a poetess. Confessional poem her way. I cite her words here: I want to be totally free to do what I have in mind.........................................That´s what she has not, but wished to do, just like that TOTALLY FREE. to DO what she has in mind........Excellent poem, a well deserved Member Poem Of The Day, CONGRATS Laura! A 10

A poem from the heart- - -It is not only you, but many of us feel like you feel.We want to do many things.But when we start doing we feel intimidated by the task, feel t as if we are not good enough for it and stop doing it at all. We have to overcome this negative feeling. You have a caring self which is evident in the last three lines.You have got talent as this poem is its evidence. Congratulations for being chosen Poet of the Day!

this the me oh very in sad tone! the self is very alone in this world when walks without any boon...........! ! ! ///

I found this poem for third time being selected as member poem of the poem of the day. Indeed it is an insightful poem on self realization. Thanks and congratulations once again.

To dream is to succeed.

wonderful self reflection. liked it very much. being honest to oneself. tony

lovely writing- I'm strong when I'm alone .. I want to be totally free to do what I have in mind //// excellent 10+++++

Everything about your words are honest and raw. I Love that you are confident with just who you are.

'I want to cook for my future family' - a nice desire.

I am glad that this poem has been selected as the poem of the day for second time. Really it is a beautiful poem. Congratulations again.

Straight from the heart. Nothing to hide from the world. Straight forward write. Loved it. Congrats on being chosen as POD.

Such a nice bizarre write of oneself...really brilliant write. Congrats on chosen as the PoD

Your poem isstrong and insightful.

I'm strenghtless when...strengthless? this feels like a long string of raw data pouring out of you; interesting indeed. bri :)

You declare you want to be totally free and you already are in the format of this poem which surges with headlong speed trying to net EVERYTHING important to you. And the energy of this freedom never flags, it's as strong in your last statement as it is in the first: I LOVE MY CRAZINESS. But that last image of cooking for your future family is also one of stasis compared to what came before. At that closing you take one last BIG LEAP over all of your present day actions and land in a future of your own imagining. And I can justly say WELCOME HOME! !

Great concept. Great write.