Another Try Comments

first off lets say that it was a great poem it made me feel like i havent in years cause everyone used to tell me that my poems sucked but this poem drove that out and made me feel normal again thank you

first i feel the poem jerky but the content is good and well expressed. keepon spirit.

I love ur poem. I like how you made each stanza rhym but yet make sense. Many people lack that in poem writng. Nice.

Nicely written poem.

a new idea.nice poem