Friday, September 28, 2007

Another Time, Another Place Comments

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My heart been burning
my soul keeps yearning
sometimes i can hardly wait
for that sweet, sweet someday
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Patrice James
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Howard Johnson 20 February 2008

The third stanza is most beautiful and well crafted, Excellent write, Patrice

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Jemarie Ragudo 26 December 2007

We share the same longings of another place and time. I, too, is tired of the present chaotic world. But, God has His time table. We wait, and when the right time comes, we'll get there. Great poem!

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Meggie Gultiano 23 October 2007

this is nice..thanks for sharing hugs, Meggie

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