Friday, July 6, 2012

Another Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once in a while, in another time and place
you meet another, who puts a smile on your face
It slowly happens, and it feels so good
even though you didn't really think it could
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Dee Corpolongo
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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2016

I will think about you with fond memory and realize our love was just not meant to be.

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Smoky Hoss 05 May 2014

Whom ever this other person was, it is they, I believe from all the wonderful poems you write, that has truly lost out. ... your last two lines show your strength, goodness and hope. Very moving poem.

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Patricia Grantham 07 December 2013

A beautiful poem of love and lost. Yes the game of love is played many times. Sometimes we win and sometimes we lose. Lets just stay in the game. A lovely write.

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

a good write Dee. sometimes things just don't fit together I love your first stanza

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Ruby Honeytip 21 November 2012

I know this feeling! This is a poem with great rhythm. Liked: -)

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Dave Walker 12 November 2012

A really fantastic flowing poem, like it.

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Dee Corpolongo

Dee Corpolongo

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