Saturday, November 15, 2008

Another Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

My thoughts of thee will not fade like the morning dew
Nor shall they part from this heart so true
They shall join me with each step
Caressing me through my day
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Patricia Gale
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Patricia How you brought the Another Time into another place with the language of yesterday was simply divine. Time was slower then, dreams lingered longer but no way could we have got beautiful poems like yours to each other with such speed. Thank you so much...Karin Anderson

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Kris Smith 15 November 2008

So touching Patricia really enjoyed the deep feeling in this poem, your heart bodes you well with your work, please continue 10 + Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 November 2008

Thou art with me my love, always will be my love.. Beautiful Patricia.. Andy 10

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