Another Tear Falls Comments

The vast primordial flood captured in one tear. Exquisite execution!

Deeply emotional write. Know that you are not a lone, I care about you, my dear friend. I pray God will give you comfort. Keep penning, love your work! :)

Don't let any man define you. Treat yourself the way you want to be treated. Do things for yourself that make you feel better, like, buy yourself something nice, do art, taking yourself out to a art show or museum, go for a long walk, whatever you would like to do, anything other then waiting around for this other person to make you feel better, it's not going to happen, it will in fact get worse if you don't put yourself first. I love all your poems, there so well written, so truthful, meaningful, and have great rhythm. You are poetry. :)

so much emotion in so few lines.. yes dramatic, but life and its enevitable pain are dramatic... I again empathise..and again see the beauty behind the tragedy. Brilliant.

So touching. I hope it helps.

I like it, though again this reference to the knife? disturbing...though I think the best poems are written by people at one end of the emotional scale or the other - very downj or very excited / or when they are simply very interested in the subject matter. I wrote 'Hello Darling' and 'Overwound' many years ago when I was feeling very down. Writing these poems were a good way of coming to terms with my feelings - a sort of self help. Time is the healer. Great poem Mark

This is an amazing poem! ! !

Very Good Poem, your works are truly inspiring

great poem, very deep but yet so beautiful...

Beautifully dramatic. Another tear would fall indeed. And even the most shattered mirror can be broken into finer pieces.

painful....strong and gets you nice write be happy :)

nice i especially like the ending line great composing 10 up =D

A very heart touching write that brought back to my mind painful memories of yesterday but guess what? I survived and so you very soon! This is a very beautiful and well crafted write! 10+++ God Bless You for always! Romeo from New York City (Thank you for all your valuable comments) ...

Great write.....and I loved the part 'this hollowness is turning me numb', sometimes 'numb' is so freeing...hugs n blessings

I loved the last two lines, 'trapped, still held captive by it all alone and hurting, another tear falls' Beautifully written. This poem is captivating, and you really think hard, or rather, you make us think, Really, how could any body broke what is already broken. nice read, keep writing :)

Beautiful and painful poem, Haha you are never alone! Crimson's always here ;) , phenomenal poem.

Great poem so sad yet deep.

Another great poem, with true emotion. A great write.