Another Sun Comments

' Spring always ends, petels fall, and rivers only run downhill', very true, Paul!

This poem so beautifully sums up how I feel about unjust fate - I wish I'd written it!

There is a lot here left unsaid, intimated in a wise, subtle way. Less is more often in modern poetry, and this is what we want to achieve: not a framed masterpiece but an energy construct. Each reader has a poem explode inside, each our own separate poem. The creative spark is shared. Thank you for sharing it, Paul.

I'm really enjoying several of your poems. Thank you for helping to make this site so interesting.

It's across betwwen reality and a dream. lovely, thanks

Paul this is stunning my friend, you paint such a lovely picture for your viewer Thank you for sharing this amazing gift of yours '10' best wishes Jon

This is both beautiful and clever. I love the shift from first to third person - it adds a greater depth to this poignant piece. Lovely S :)

Paul, The best poem i've come across today! Excellent and easily understood. This achieves on all levels. It connects with the reader, and also has a steady point which culminates in a succesful conclusion. Really excellent man 10/10

Something sad, but poignant about this write...perhaps because it is a true reflection of life, love and it's fleeting moments...Coach