Another Step To Heaven Comments
You wake up and you find the mists pursuing heavens gate
like barley twist they fold with fumes from your last cigarette
you rise as they caress you reaching underneath your skin
another step to heaven from the hell your living in
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Very deep. It felt like I was on the walk myself. A very good read.
I really enjoyed this, because I felt the struggle to stay just one step ahead - with the hot fires burning right behind me.....only to reach Heaven's gate, and to know that my struggle was just beginning! ! Well Done Charlie Brown!
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7/19/2025 7:32:05 AM # 1.0.0
A metric form I've never seen before - heptameter - incredibly well done. The image of the cigarette unifies the whole. An amazing work. Among your finest.