Sunday, September 27, 2009

Another Statistic Comments

Rating: 2.5

This entire existence is violent,
Yet the media will remain silent.
Darkness overwhelms the vastness of light.
Cannot anyone cease these pointless fights?
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Alex Gomez
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Hannah Adams 04 October 2009

Wow, its beautiful how ur able to portray the sad reality of the life so many people are sucked into. A lot of ppl out there close their eyes and try pretending these things dont happen, but ur brave enough to acknowledge that it does and to open our eyes to it all! Wonderful job!

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Romeo Della Valle 27 September 2009

Wow, Alex, you just a 'home run' with all the bases loaded, this poem clearly describes the situation here in New York City, with all these teens, killing one another every day, today foolish fights between teen gangs, is tomorrow's Headline, so sad, ignorance among youth is perpetuated by the current media, what a pity! You got my vote,10+, well-deserved, Love and Peace, Romeo

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