Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Another Spell Comments

Rating: 2.6

Prolonging spell
Making sickness like heart
Wrenching in aches of viscera
To retrieve myself from hollowness
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Kesav Easwaran 17 September 2009

Yours this 'another spell'...you describe very vividly and eloquently Sadiq...original and creative...10

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2009

Very eloquent. Your last stanza makes me believe that you have found those brighter days.10 for your mysterious moodscape. Kind wishes, Sandra

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