Friday, January 6, 2012

Another Soldier Dies Comments

Rating: 4.8

As another day dawns
another soldier dies
at the hands of politics
and the simple minds
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Dave Alan Walker
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Ruby Honeytip 10 December 2012

Right on! ! So much weight carried by so few words: -)

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Guy Lip-more 06 December 2012

Short to the point, my sentiments aslo. Great little write.

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Kevin Patrick 05 March 2012

Unwritten soul is right To be a soldier takes strength and discipline to stand up for your country while taking orders from cowards and fools who will never fight. This is simple but exact to everything that happens and always will, great read

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 12 February 2012

short and simple but reveals a great truth.thank you.bye bye

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Jodie Cooper 17 January 2012

wow this is short but amazing how can so few words be so full of emoiton

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 15 January 2012

Simple, short and naked truth I enjoyed. Sir u are great writer. If find time check this two poems letter to the poets, revolution in evolution and prayer of the lad

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Pheko Motaung 13 January 2012

'Can't add or subtract to this honest truth.Your poem is great friend! Thanks for enlightening us.

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Rajendran Muthiah 12 January 2012

Brevity is the soul of your poetic craft. On the day dawns, another soldier falls and the government lie that they fell for the nation. Cheers dear friend!

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Ranis Thomas iii 11 January 2012

Amen to that! ! Very true! Short, simple and right to the point. Nice!

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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2012

They die with pride for sure but the politician who use them for gain pride is a lie. For fallen protectors, thanks a lot for being a shield, may God reply all goodness for them, and for all liars that use lies as protector, nothing will shield you from truth, it just about time :) _Unwritten Soul

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Jacqui Broad 09 January 2012

Yes, every second, somewhere in this world, a soldier dies. For what? There's still no peace. I wish for one day that there'll be no war, for that day, we can say it was truly peaceful. Thanks Dave, for giving credit to those freedom fighters.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

and we are all that soldiers who they fighting for freedom from politicians.... really a great poem! ! ! 10+++

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Eric Cockrell 06 January 2012

and bring them home! great poem!

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Ahmed Khaled 06 January 2012

It is you who can be depended on in doing such matters, simple, clear and comfortable to mind as they are designed to assist at getting the peace of mind, because going to the point in the indirect astonishing style is the job of the professional ones, aiming at placing the readers; the beholders of your paintings in such a remarkable tranquillity to see the entire scene in ease and comfort............ thank you my friend the creator of dead soldiers and living poems.............. your very friend: : : : : : : : : PH.D: -AHMED KHALRD

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Binish Cd 06 January 2012

it is a truth that soldiers every where are not treated with the due respect that should be given to them. its a truth that they die at the hands of the decisions taken by the wrong politicians. it is really great to speak for them, , , , , , , , , , , , great write, dear friend.

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Wahab Abdul 06 January 2012

again this is a good poem sir...i like it....

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