As another day dawns
another soldier dies
at the hands of politics
and the simple minds
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Unwritten soul is right To be a soldier takes strength and discipline to stand up for your country while taking orders from cowards and fools who will never fight. This is simple but exact to everything that happens and always will, great read
short and simple but reveals a great truth.thank you.bye bye
wow this is short but amazing how can so few words be so full of emoiton
Simple, short and naked truth I enjoyed. Sir u are great writer. If find time check this two poems letter to the poets, revolution in evolution and prayer of the lad
'Can't add or subtract to this honest truth.Your poem is great friend! Thanks for enlightening us.
Brevity is the soul of your poetic craft. On the day dawns, another soldier falls and the government lie that they fell for the nation. Cheers dear friend!
Amen to that! ! Very true! Short, simple and right to the point. Nice!
They die with pride for sure but the politician who use them for gain pride is a lie. For fallen protectors, thanks a lot for being a shield, may God reply all goodness for them, and for all liars that use lies as protector, nothing will shield you from truth, it just about time :) _Unwritten Soul
Yes, every second, somewhere in this world, a soldier dies. For what? There's still no peace. I wish for one day that there'll be no war, for that day, we can say it was truly peaceful. Thanks Dave, for giving credit to those freedom fighters.
and we are all that soldiers who they fighting for freedom from politicians.... really a great poem! ! ! 10+++
It is you who can be depended on in doing such matters, simple, clear and comfortable to mind as they are designed to assist at getting the peace of mind, because going to the point in the indirect astonishing style is the job of the professional ones, aiming at placing the readers; the beholders of your paintings in such a remarkable tranquillity to see the entire scene in ease and comfort............ thank you my friend the creator of dead soldiers and living poems.............. your very friend: : : : : : : : : PH.D: -AHMED KHALRD
it is a truth that soldiers every where are not treated with the due respect that should be given to them. its a truth that they die at the hands of the decisions taken by the wrong politicians. it is really great to speak for them, , , , , , , , , , , , great write, dear friend.
Right on! ! So much weight carried by so few words: -)