Monday, September 28, 2009

Another Snake Comments

Rating: 1.4

(few days back I saw A big snake in my dreams, the same snake which was in this poem about to hurt me tomorrow..29/09/09..9am)
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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Ian Bowen 29 September 2009

I do not consider this piece of work to be worthy of having been written by a poet who sits in the upper echelons of the Great List. I found your poem to be badly written, very hard to understand, numerous spelling mistake, and the grammar left a lot to be desired. I know you will now try to attack me for my honesty...Why?

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