Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Another Shade Of Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've forgotten
how to dream.
Seems the future
holds another shade
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Ken E Hall 26 July 2012

Sadness fills the heart on bygone memories with a perfect title that heralds the poem sinking into another shade...regards

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Sally P. P. 14 July 2019

Thanks for your appreciation, Kev. Many good wishes to you.

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Kevin Halls 06 July 2012

Beautiful words Sally. But don't get tired of writing your poetry whatever you do.

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Karen Sinclair 04 July 2012

Just so beautiful and sad.... the tie up line just speaks volumes...tyvm karen

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John Raubenheimer 28 June 2012

You don't waste words, ever. Your thoughts fold round my own, sharing.

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Danny Draper 27 June 2012

There is remorse and regret, but moreover a weary present reflecting on lighter and perhaps brighter times.

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Heather Wilson 27 June 2012

Hark to my heart it beats tight as a drum, wonderful words with sad undertones, so well written

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Ray Schreiber 27 June 2012

excellent capture of an experience widely shared. This state of blue, no matter the details, will always drain and sap ones strength. A fit ending... and I am tired.

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Valerie Dohren 27 June 2012

Lovely poem, very touching, and we've all been there.

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Joseph Anderson 27 June 2012

Hang on Sally, maybe help is on the way.A poignant remimder of the dark valleys where our mind oft will wander. A to the point write- very good

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Sally P. P. 10 March 2020

Thanks for your lovely comment, Joseph.

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