Sunday, June 3, 2007

Another Sad Love Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

If leaving words not said would hurt
Then I would bleed unto the dirt
My heart would ache
My soul would break
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Fatin Khalid
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Chaminda Pushpadewa 08 December 2018

hi dear poet this is a nice poem because of love made heartache to whole humans

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Paul Stertz 13 November 2008

My friend, I have lived what you are describing here and you have a way of pouring out all those regretful feelings into verse. Your poem is ingenious and one of the best I have read on this site. Thank you, thank you so much for sharing!

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Inday Prising 07 June 2008

i like it! i really, really like it! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 May 2008

oh god, why.........tell me why? love is so beautiful and so great. i feel like i'm reborn................yes reborn.

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