Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Another Sad Little Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Abandoned by all those she knew,
As though they couldnt see through,
Her painted on guise,
they just sat there and aqiesced her lies,
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Kat Edwards
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THIS ONE IS DEFINITELY MY FAVORITE! ! ! ! It is AWESOME! ! ! ! ....Just like me! ! ! NINJAS! ! ! ! <33Payyton

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 20 January 2009

this is one of the best poems i have EVER read! ! ! ur an amazing writer and u should keep at it.... i kno a 14 year olds opinion means very little in this world but this piece got to me

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Tom Balch 27 October 2008

Great piece, well crafted 10/10

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Chocolate Bunny 24 October 2008

tears and pain. good write

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Drake Kinkaid 24 October 2008

Very sensual... You are good

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