Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Another Sacrifice! Comments

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When I inhale the beauty of the earth through the eyes
Its fragrance, hues, colors, Celestials and sun rise,
Death! Thy art holy, mingles with earth, the only choice
Lungs full breathing without fear, ’O’ Nature thy voice!
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Kalyan Mech 13 November 2013

Thanks for your inspiring comment sir.....you too sacrificed a little time to read my poem......thanks again.....i am waiting for more inspirational comment.

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Ken E Hall 16 September 2013

Life is a wonder and the road ahead leads us to the end and you explain it so well...regards

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2013

death is certain it can never b denied a natural phenomenon who is born has to die. but is it bliss so to the dependent compels to come on street n beg for survival

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

your second stanza is a great take on death. If only we can look at it that way.

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Buxton Shippy 04 May 2013

Seeing death from another angle; good thing it can be prepared for.

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David Wood 27 April 2013

Death is a door that we must all pass through. There is no escape. We must all accept thus without worry. A good write Aftab.

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Babatunde Aremu 25 April 2013

Another sacrifice indeed. Great write, keep the pen alive

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