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Thursday, March 27, 2008

Another Row Comments

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As the words spilled out
more sour than my drunken bile
my heart rhythm beat
this - is - it
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Vik Harley

Confusion

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Callie Carroll 27 March 2008

I am very interested in seeing what you do with this poem. I live by a railroad and the rhythm of your heart and (? the train/subway...) really intrigued me. Lines 17 and 18... will you work with them further?

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