Monday, March 13, 2017

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Who advised her loving near the ditch,
The fat woman forced him to flinch,
The lean boy friend couldn't play,
Left her alone and ran away,
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Geetha Jayakumar 20 March 2017

Beautiful limerick. Enjoyed reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2017

It is a best limerick. Amusing one. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ..10

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Khalid Saifullah 13 March 2017

Enjoyed the poetic conversation through Limericks.

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Valsa George 13 March 2017

Why did the lanky fellow run away? Probably he must have been afraid of getting crushed or did he see in her the image of an elephant on rampage? However the 'encounter' ended disastrously!

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