Friday, September 23, 2011

Another Race Comments

Rating: 2.5

The gates are opening, and there's the starter pistol:
The fetal heart begins pumping, moving the vaporous blood along;
Still more gas than fluid, around it's newly formed silo of vessels.
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Patti Masterman
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Jim Troy 24 September 2011

Never have heard or imagined such a sweet and complete journey as told only as a mother could ever tell it... Complete total comcern is always there and loving the new life at every juncture... It is such a privelege to read about this wonderful miracle from the major participant. Much appreciated... A beautiful love poem Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 23 September 2011

very well done.., . you've painted a miracle!

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