Mother, I'm trying
to write
a poem to you—
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How to describe that world that mothers spin and consume and trap and love us in, that spreads for years and men and miles? Those particular hands that could smooth anything: butter on bread, --------A great poem!
Congratulations being The MOdern Poem Of The Day, perfect poem to read and much enjoyed the words created here with finest feel.5 Stars!
those mother-hands that pet and shape and slap, that sew you together the pieces of a better house or life- a mother whose love and care built us all up in love. tony
How to describe that world that mothers spin and consume and trap and love us in, that spreads for years and men and miles? a very fine poem. Tony
With Mothers all over the world the amazing thing is no two Mothers are the same. We are all individual yet all one. Heartfelt write. Thank You
You penned it so beautifully dear Erin! Hearty congratulations for being chosen as the POD...10+++
Those mother-hands that pet! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem, though difficult to write about mom but u did it fantastically.
'but we as children of mothers, even when mothers ourselves, cannot bear our poems to them.' - True! Mother's love is irreplaceable. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Modern Poem of the Day'!
A beautiful poem on motherhood. 'What I've wanted to say, Mother...but we as children of mothers, even when mothers ourselves, '..is true. Enjoyed thoroughly.10++++++
Lovely poem. Words fall short when ever we try to describe mother. The depth of Motherhood we realize only after becoming one. Congratulations for Modern poem honour.
Beautifully done. Love of mother for her child is unconditional.and not enough words to describe it. I see a special bond and love between mothers with their moms. I see it in my mother-in-law, my wife and my daughter. Great poem. Congrats on POD.10+++++.
Best lines ever, I've done no better than the others, but for now, here is your clever failure. Thanks for sharing. Congrats on being poet of the day!
wonderful expression on mother attitude - hose mother-hands that pet and shape and slap, that sew you together the pieces of a better house or life in which you'll try to live. /// great poem, love it
This poem by Erin Belieu is so sweet...................................
those mother-hands that pet and shape and slap, that sew you together the pieces of a better house........... this is a very fine poem on mother...... God bless u. tony
WOW! How dashinating (dashing and fascinating) is this poem. Excellently created and a great pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. A TEN and much much more for the Vote. CONGRATS for being chosen as Modern Poem of The DAY! Sincerely, Sylvia Frances Chan
Mothers try their best. They may fall short too but one has to become a mother to know this. Not a piece of cake by any measure. But blaming couldn’t get one anywhere accept having credit of an excellent poem in one’s hand.
Mother's hands are the way of life for every child in childhood life- great poem penned about Mother