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vividly penned....almost drowned in your words...ofcourse unlike the drowning of a typical drinker.. i enjoyed the swirl of your creativity. good work

A very vivid depiction of the typical drinker.....drowing sorrows in alcohol - well written poem

Yea I quit smoking after 30 years. We all love our addictions. Good poem.

drinking away our pain and listening to all the 'you done me wrong songs', , , and the character content with the misery takes another, , , , , a cycle of an ideal drinker, , ,

Good flow Good write

I enjoyed this poem very much..sad sounding.iip.thanks you...

i am speechless... u R amazing u write so vividly and clearly i c u n this poem beautiful

WOW, this is amazing! : DDDDDD I'm honored you like mine because you're a wonderful poet!