Another Place Comments

A glorious beginning and a wrenching end. The dilemma of falling in love and not having it returned. But love has to be freely given. I like a lot of your lines in this one. The beginning is well phrased and calls for immediate attention.

you have locked up inside and take the vow to be by my side. from now until the day we die...... sincere proposal for invite.. poet has all clean ideas and goal.... keen desire too....woven with good oratory.....10

Lovely & touchy poem,10 added.

Very touching. This would make a wonderful Valentine.10 for your romantic soul. Warm regards, Sandra

we are made for another place.................

'i'll move the earth to make you mine.' Best line in the poem.

willing to give everything for your love..........this is a very romantic poem.......its amazing how you say your heart was torn but you gave it back......... that shows how much in love you are excellent poem

I loved this poem! Great Flow! I liked I think the third stanza best that generated a lot for me. Wonderful poem from start to finish. Truly magnifcent!

The ending works very well with this poem you wrote this with grace and full of hope.. This poem flows so well too... Great poem KRISTA

i love the start, and I adore the end. lovely

How sad yet sweet...thank you for this one.

very passionate write. I liked it.