Wednesday, January 7, 2009

Another Piece Of Me Comments

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Crushed like wet sand in the hands of a unknowing child
My heart is scattered as carelessly as rose petals on the floor.
God has yet once again, taken one more thing that matters to me.
To make us the people we are, we must take and endure these scars.
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Cory Jensen
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Linda Hepner 21 January 2009

If there's anything more intense than a relationship of two, it's a relationship of three. You've expressed that intensely, the pain is palpable. But my advice is: avoid it, run, flee, start anew in freedom. And write as you go! >>> Linda

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Rachel The Hair Guru 12 January 2009

I am blown away at the maturity in your writings. You must have had experienced so much in your 17 years. The way you express yourself is magical. Thank you for sharing. And remember, lifes challenges build character, give us experiences, stories to share, ways to relate to others. They make us better human beings :)

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