Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Another Perfect Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eyes wide shut
As I begin to awake
Laughing at memories
And our times well spent
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Adam Day
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2019

Soft nestled breeze seeps. Spring time is remembered. With wide eyes life is perceived with nature. This poem is excellently penned.10

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Tj Becker 03 October 2008

I start each day reading a poem, a habit since I can remember. I'm glad I choice this one today. Well written with wonderful flow, and a nice feeling while reading. You painted the perfect day in such few words.

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Tia Maria 02 October 2008

ah - that is so lovely. May you two always be this blessed :) 10++

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Pacific Hernandez 30 September 2008

An elegant poem for a love one. Neatly written. 10 for you.

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Little Hatila ;) 26 September 2008

what a poem...form title to the bottom it was great...good job i give 10

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Ginger Gipson 25 September 2008

Wow I am shocked. That is great. Keep up the great work.

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Lindsey Rogers 24 September 2008

You write such beautiful poems about me

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