Another Parable Comments

ur parable s very beautiful, , from creation of the wrld where GOD s the frst character yhen came the people, people wth diffrent nterests nterest to rule, destroy but cudnt change the facts the facts that everthing ends wth a purpose ..it cud be a punishment or jst a proof that no one lives like GOD so, while still living make our lives gud as perfect as GOD'S...

From the scholars of science and religion....into a refine poets observation came a parable of his own. From the nothingness, there goes creation of heaven and earth, the story of the principal elements of human kind. Interesting poem, provokative...as we can relate it to what is happening to our world now in chaos, mass distructions etc....10+

layers of deep thinking effusing the pearls of wisdom talking about creation, God and His kingdom

A good treatise on creation and God. I tried something a little different I AM GOD.But I liked this poem sathya narayana

And glory begets disgrace, for some accursed creature thought that balance might be possible down the road between extremes, and the most accursed of all thought that poetry might be the balm to cure us of our ills, and so it might but at the cost of the reader's ever weakening grip on what's left of the little sanity and sense he'd cobbled together from scraps of notions evolving down the generations. It's not an easy thing to do Fred but you've produced something which should put a smile on the reader's dish. It did on mine. A pleasure to read. You see all the connections and laid a few of them out with style. Thanks.

So God cannot make our perfect lives, and we certainly cannot, so where does that leave us? We have learned to exist with imperfection.