Monday, March 17, 2008

Another One Down Comments

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I’m looking all around me
At what I used to be
The friends I had by my side
Friendships I thought would never die
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Tahnee Somebody
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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013

A very intense poem about suicide. Suicide seems to hit you hard, but you pretend to not let it bother you. Deep down inside, it touches you somewhere, but you don't want to deal with it. It's just another one down. Keep writing, the light will come when you look beyond your self to help someone else. You're a very powerful writer, because of what you've gone through. Don't waste your talent on suicide, you have a higher purpose in life. Look forward to reading more of your poetry when I can. RoseAnn

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