Thursday, August 1, 2013

Another Night Was Spent Comments

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I lay on bed waiting for that moment,
The night guard passed on his last round
Mournfully whistling another night was spent,
Though the night was still lulled by weary crickets’ sound.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 02 August 2013

The transition from night to dawn is beautiful with sunlight slowly peeping in and the songs of early birds! Some images in the poem, I loved much!

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Lorraine Colon 02 August 2013

I love the time just before dawn. It's still dark, but the birds know it's time to sing and wake everyone up. Very nice reading this.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2013

Beautiful way each lines are expressed..Lovely poem and loved reading it.

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