Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Another Night Ended Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sly Stallion of mankind
Zippered up and gathered
Relief behind a thirst quenched tree
Slowly marches back
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Kim Schilling
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Manonton Dalan 06 October 2008

H2O n CO2 for receptable trees but rejected by beauty of same specie... hmmmm i could imagine the smile yo have. thanks for sharing.md

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Bill Grace 02 October 2008

I do not understand this poem to 100% but I enjoyed reading it 100%. Bill Grace

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Fay Slimm 15 August 2008

Very aptly described Kim. I salute your brilliant penmanship.

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Ivor Hogg 14 August 2008

sounds typical of todays young males. I hark back to earlier days more courtesy same goal in mind. I never ever heard a tree complain

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Bob Gibson 04 May 2008

I've quenched many a tree in my youth, and i wasn't marking my boundries! those days are long gone, i grew up! loved your poem! you have talent!

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Flora Gillingham 09 April 2008

What a delightful fella. Like the 'thirst quenched tree' (or rather I don't if you see what I mean) , Enjoyed it very much. F

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Kim Schilling

Kim Schilling

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