Another Moment Comments
Given another moment
to retreat those lies
would you again whisper
her name.
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What secrets fade and wither from a mournful heart, where forever slips away good lines. *Purkey Girl*
Beautifully written with some stunning precision in the imagery you evoke and the plays on words. For me the stanza: Some semblence of sorrow slips from vodka tongues loosened towards truth where sober lies hide. has it all. Alliteration. Two wonderful phrases: 'semblance of sorrow' and 'sober lies' wherein there is such contradiction. Truly impressive and so tightly written (the latter being the output of a skill I am not sure I have to anything like the same measure) . Impressive indeed. Tony
This rings true to the heart. If only for those moments...beautifully written
A beautiful episode...but it is so tragic. Sounds like quite the story, that is for sure. This is an original piece of art, right here. I really like it.
Very sympathetic poem.... if only I could I would take that another moment! Thanks for sharing! A 10.
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7/26/2025 1:26:02 PM # 1.0.0
Keeping maybes as treasures you promise something more Its morning in my hemisphere and I was about to have my coffee perhaps I'll settle for the acerbity that undergrids this work! Excellent write budzz and my apologies for a delayed visit