As the scalpel
cuts through my flesh
I am wide awake
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Vivid dreams, like this poem, are amazing. I can't help pondering what it is our mind, or our heart, is saying to us in dreams such as this. I truly like this poem Dave, very good.
Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.
Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.
Sounds more like a nightmare rather than a dream - definitely scary.
Surgeons do operate now with the patient awake so how do you know its not a dream, scary.
haha bit funny with amazing unique style...well done, thanks for sharing
an amazing poem in dream....and out of it