Saturday, June 1, 2013

Another Lucid Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

As the scalpel
cuts through my flesh
I am wide awake
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Dave Alan Walker
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 26 July 2013

an amazing poem in dream....and out of it

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Smoky Hoss 16 June 2013

Vivid dreams, like this poem, are amazing. I can't help pondering what it is our mind, or our heart, is saying to us in dreams such as this. I truly like this poem Dave, very good.

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Philip Carter 09 June 2013

Scary dream, love it.

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Babatunde Aremu 07 June 2013

Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.

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Babatunde Aremu 07 June 2013

Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.

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Valerie Dohren 04 June 2013

Sounds more like a nightmare rather than a dream - definitely scary.

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David Wood 03 June 2013

Surgeons do operate now with the patient awake so how do you know its not a dream, scary.

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Farah Ilyas 02 June 2013

haha bit funny with amazing unique style...well done, thanks for sharing

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