Deep blue ocean waves
Crawling at ivory white sandy beach
From a long journey
A thousand miles away
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a new epic of love ha...its nice..undying admiration..its very beautiful... to the author, , , ur so great, gifted wth fantastic mind, talented-skilled man, a hero for me nd a favorite to some...able 2.put into writes evrything that s ''IN''..THS LINES ARE VERY GOOD, NICE TO READ..hon, ur so great..
You have done a good job with the three sets of allusions, and have made really smooth transitions between them. Good job.
no single word can describe how lovely written with high emotions this Love Epic is simply magnificant good luck
Assalaamualaikum Very well written... Mashallah Take care... Arhozie
Wonderful imagery. Good usgae of words. The poem flowed nicely. emotional piece on love, well thought out and well written. Good read.
I just love it.... its a beautiful explanation about love feeling...
this is a beautiful poem i love it. your truly a good poetry writer in my book
Lovely poem, full of life and feeling. I particularly like the line 'Beautiful bubbles, Foamy as your drools'. When you love a person, everything about them becomes beautiful, the more natural the better. And suddenly the objective standars of an unforgiving world become irrelevant...
Very visual...I love the fact that its full of episodes. U r good! ! !
sulaiman, Very sensitively, beautiful poems... Thanks for sharing... Kindest regads... Tsira
It had to be experienced to be so vivid. FABULOUS,