Monday, January 14, 2008

Another Love Epic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep blue ocean waves
Crawling at ivory white sandy beach
From a long journey
A thousand miles away
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Expiallidocious 22 December 2019

It had to be experienced to be so vivid. FABULOUS,

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Naidz Ladia 12 January 2009

a new epic of love ha...its nice..undying admiration..its very beautiful... to the author, , , ur so great, gifted wth fantastic mind, talented-skilled man, a hero for me nd a favorite to some...able 2.put into writes evrything that s ''IN''..THS LINES ARE VERY GOOD, NICE TO READ..hon, ur so great..

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Analou Pabalate 03 October 2008

yea........................nice poem...........

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John Parsons 13 August 2008

You have done a good job with the three sets of allusions, and have made really smooth transitions between them. Good job.

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Rehab Helmy 02 August 2008

no single word can describe how lovely written with high emotions this Love Epic is simply magnificant good luck

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Arhoz Anvi 05 July 2008

Assalaamualaikum Very well written... Mashallah Take care... Arhozie

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Sanya Semakula 28 May 2008

Wonderful imagery. Good usgae of words. The poem flowed nicely. emotional piece on love, well thought out and well written. Good read.

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I like it...good job pal.

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I just love it.... its a beautiful explanation about love feeling...

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Anita Grassrope 06 May 2008

this is a beautiful poem i love it. your truly a good poetry writer in my book

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Laoibhse Ni Canain 22 April 2008

Lovely poem, full of life and feeling. I particularly like the line 'Beautiful bubbles, Foamy as your drools'. When you love a person, everything about them becomes beautiful, the more natural the better. And suddenly the objective standars of an unforgiving world become irrelevant...

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Ziyada Paulos 28 March 2008

Very visual...I love the fact that its full of episodes. U r good! ! !

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Teardrops Falling 26 March 2008

Wow, very sensual, flowing, and sooo beautiful!

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La'sharae Wade 22 March 2008

Very nice and romantic.

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Tsira Goge 21 March 2008

sulaiman, Very sensitively, beautiful poems... Thanks for sharing... Kindest regads... Tsira

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Christian MERLE 06 March 2008

That's love...isn't it?

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Amanda Johnson 29 January 2008

i love it, its VERY deep

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