Sunday, November 7, 2010

Another Lonely Night Comments

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Another lonely night
I wait by the shores of my mind
For a breeze to blow clear
The staleness that lingers there
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Smoky Hoss 01 February 2016

Absolutely wonderful; very thoughtful words.

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Kim Barney 19 November 2014

Nice sonnet. I like the way you used the shores of my mind.

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Matthew Petranovich 07 November 2010

Very Nice. I like it alot.

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