Friday, March 3, 2006

Another Letter To Fill The Basket Comments

Rating: 4.8

Well I'm sitting here thinking
on a friday night
the television's rubbish
and I'm feeling uptight
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Charles M Moore
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Will Barber 02 May 2006

Another wonderful poem, only marred by 'your' for 'you're'. Oh lord, if I couldn only edit instead of uploading my feeble words.

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Con Nie 16 April 2006

Expressive poem about longing for connection with your love. Good one. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Linda Ori 08 April 2006

O, wow, Charlie - you put it just right! I have a drawer full of letters written but can't bring myself to send them. Fear will strangle us, but avoiding the rejection is less painful. If I burn them will it release the words to the place they need to go? Crying - Linda

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Mike Finley 08 March 2006

I like the bit about smelling the scarf best. I would end the poem with that somehow. The sensory information is more um, impactful, than the grim judgment.

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Duncan Wyllie 08 March 2006

I enjoyed the cycle of this one but I also felt the sorrow.Hope things are better for you.Take care.Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 03 March 2006

Sad Charles, I hope it turns out Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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