He broke my heart
now its raining
try not to rub it in
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it's from the heart and the statement 'Another lesson learned' has in itself a sense of healing. l enjoyed it
Yep, you made your point, but one could say it's a little repetitive. Ruth
Very good work. A poem that is well suited to being read aloud with lots of nice simple thoughts that express universally recognised ideas and a repeating chorus that can be recited with lots of passion.
Experience, the best Master, makes us learn many, many day in and day out!
Break up of relationship can be dismal. But, dear poet, that is not the end of the world. Think positive and move ahead. All the best…