Thursday, January 24, 2008

Another Lesson Was Learned Comments

Rating: 5.0

He broke my heart
now its raining
try not to rub it in
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Aiesha Freela
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Break up of relationship can be dismal. But, dear poet, that is not the end of the world. Think positive and move ahead. All the best…

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 March 2010

it's from the heart and the statement 'Another lesson learned' has in itself a sense of healing. l enjoyed it

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Ruth Campbell 13 February 2008

Yep, you made your point, but one could say it's a little repetitive. Ruth

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Philip Housiaux 25 January 2008

Very good work. A poem that is well suited to being read aloud with lots of nice simple thoughts that express universally recognised ideas and a repeating chorus that can be recited with lots of passion.

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Subbaraman N V 24 January 2008

Experience, the best Master, makes us learn many, many day in and day out!

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Aiesha Freela

Aiesha Freela

San Diego, California
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