Monday, December 8, 2008

Another Goodbye Comments

Rating: 3.5

Joy and laughter
but had no resolve
inner peace, not at all
people and thoughts
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Aiman Rathore
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Waqas Naeem 07 February 2009

these are very well-written, touching lines...and with the subtle pain lurching around, they make a splendid read... bravo..

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Samantha Grant 27 December 2008

i can really relate to this...i liked the lines: 'but it's not like I did not wait I waited all my life going through so much for something that was never mine'

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Aiman Rathore

Aiman Rathore

Lahore, Pakistan
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