Thursday, September 10, 2009

'Another- Flowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Another- flowers of autumn
If its seems to you so pale..
And if their secret is light...
Also to soul has not reached...
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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So poetic. Fresh inspiration. The hope of spring.... Beautifully written; D

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Eyan Desir 30 November 2009

Flowers are always good...10s

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i take any flower. good poetry

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Costa Anakiev 23 September 2009

Well done, Tsira. Absolutely lovely. Konstantin.

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Cash Cow 22 September 2009

Tsira is the flower. :)

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Rachel Butler 17 September 2009

Forgotten already - was. Forget that will be - now... Rachel Ann Butler

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Mark Nwagwu 13 September 2009

Take my autumn florets and Do not speak that, is so pale... Secret lights for hope of spring... Also grief for april early is still. Tsira, in this stanza you so graphically and solemnly capture life's purpose - grief and hope, embedded in love - 'do not speak that, is so pale'... This issurely a poet's delight. Incredibly good.10 all the wayl mark i

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2009

Another lovely write Tsira, I love autumn, well penned 10 Lynda xx

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David Harris 10 September 2009

Tsira, this is really beautiful with a lovely flow. Filled with the sadness of autumn and the hope of a new spring. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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