Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Another Farewell Comments

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Ramblings after visit to those I know
Family time, secrets unfold
Meet the last in the Family line
Brother's and Sister's all farewelled
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

Ramblings, after visit to those you know at last you meet with family. Sadness fills the air if allowed in separation due to agony. A wave, a goodbye that struggles to flow moistens tomorrow's path. Amazing experience of farewell is drawn in this brilliant poem...10

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John Ahern 12 October 2017

Kumarmani Mahakul, thank you for your kind words. It is always good to know how others view poetry. Your comment itself shows that you have indeed seen the real meaning of what I called ramblings about a farewell of a person one may never see again. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this poem.

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