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There is something thats pulling me back
I don't know why it's sucking me in,
every time i wanna change the track
i slowly tend to simply give in.
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yes I agree with your idea..one should nt be worried and leave all worries behind and enjoy..specially when its own time for rest... well done and like your following stanza...10++++++++++ wish i'll live to see the day when i sleep without worrying, when i can finally find the way & when i stop planning! !
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7/21/2025 1:30:49 PM # 1.0.0
Yes, life sure will bring disappointments in so many things, but you confide in your writing how you feel and it is familiar to me. Your poem rings true. Nice writing.10/10.